Something for Certain~ j. neelThe drums played onWith the primordial bassEchoing in the background.The beat was different for some—the seers, the lovers, the dreamersAnd elaborate dances evolvedEmanating from the percussion,Reverberating into spiraling armsof resonant beauty.And there was truth and lightAmongst the music and the masses.The momentum spread in wavesGrowing and touching others—infinitely expanding,Until they collapsed on themselves.And the void was filled without formBut only a brilliant, blinding illumination.And we knew something for certain….Type the rest of your post here.
in the spirit of community and being myself, i thought i'd share a poem that i wrote with you. i hope you find something in it that you like :)...
I like it very much! You write well.
Beautiful. Have you seen any pictures of supernovas? That is what I thought of when I read that last line. Every line illustrated in my mind's eye a nice picture.
thanks for the kinds words and nice images... i like supernovas :)...
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